Is this necessary to the plot?
If so, why won't they do it?
If not so, should this piece be removed?
If it shouldn't, is it because it really develops a character or relationship?
Is it within the character's personality to do this?
If not, why are they doing it?
Is it supposed to be out of character for a specific reason?
Are you answering these questions just to not have to delete a huge effort? Lemme talk about that last one there.
There are two possible responses I could give you:
1) Don't do that. If you know it's not useful at all, don't keep it. Or, save it somewhere where you can get to it if necessary.
OR
2) Go ahead and keep it! You worked hard, and it came out great? So what if it doesn't fit? Make it!So, which will I say? I say: both. I have been in this so many times. Sometimes, it's something that isn't worth fixing effort, but occasionally (hallelujah) you make minor changes and it works! Just make sure you can tell the difference.
Leara
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