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I once saw something that said 'Writer's Block: When characters get fed up with all you put them through and go on strike'. How completely and ironically true! You make up someone, dress them, feed them a personality, send them off into the world and what do they do? Protest! In case you couldn't tell, I'm talking about one of the most annoying questions that pops up during the writing process. "Sure, I know what's gonna happen next, but how do I make them [the characters] do it?" And, insane as it may sound, you negotiate with them. Here are some questions to ask yourself (or them):
Is this necessary to the plot?
If so, why won't they do it?
If not so, should this piece be removed?
If it shouldn't, is it because it really develops a character or relationship?
Is it within the character's personality to do this?
If not, why are they doing it?
Is it supposed to be out of character for a specific reason?
Are you answering these questions just to not have to delete a huge effort? Lemme talk about that last one there.
There are two possible responses I could give you:
1) Don't do that. If you know it's not useful at all, don't keep it. Or, save it somewhere where you can get to it if necessary.
OR
2) Go ahead and keep it! You worked hard, and it came out great? So what if it doesn't fit? Make it!
So, which will I say? I say: both. I have been in this so many times. Sometimes, it's something that isn't worth fixing effort, but occasionally (hallelujah) you make minor changes and it works! Just make sure you can tell the difference.
Leara

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